by Whitey Sep 20, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
It was all just a futile game, |
by Deana
Excellent, I read it over a couple of times ,I wanted to make sure I was getting it,very powerful message. |
Quite good. The imagery was done exceptionally well. Flowed well with a good message. Good job. |
Wow, that was a powerful poem. Painted a really vivid picture in my mind. Keep up the good work, I look forward to reading some more of your work. =]] |