Exposed {Cinquain}

by Natalie   Sep 20, 2006


.........................Exposed,
....................Secrets revealed,
.............Battle scars showed all truth,
.....Tears cried out for some helping hands,
............................Again.

20th September 2006
Copyright (C) Natalie.

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Cinquain: A short, usually unrhymed poem consisting
of twenty-two syllables distributed as 2, 4, 6, 8, 2,
in five lines.
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_I havn't been able to write anything in awhile.. and alot has happened lately, and this is the best I could do for now. :]

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  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    All you could do for now?! Jeeze, it's better than I'd ever be able to do with a short poem. I thought there was emotion, and that's all there is needed in a poem. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    In such a short poem, you chose the right words to tell your story. You did an excellent job, once again. I think how you ended it with again, made the ending seem alot stronger. Well done. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Letty

    Another great poem. This was very sad also. You have taken a few simple lines and told a full story with them. I loved it . You are truly a wonderful poet hun. Keep up the excellent work!
    5/5

    Hugs
    Letty

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Well if thats th best you can do for now i cant wait to read what you have later, such a short poem but so much energy and emotions released, great work, i could almost feel that one, 5/5 again from me

    xoxo Lucy

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    This short poem burst a whole world of thoughts that tortures my poor mind.
    Excellent job natalie.
    This is an Ace for sure.
    5/5

    God Bless!

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