Awwh, I like it! Hehe.. You know I love all your stuff Taleee.. How could anyone not like it? Lol.. This was very sad.. Sorry, not really a very good comment, but feeling a little depressed.. =P Anyways, nicely done sweetie! Ily 5/5

Very nicely written. Short but beautiful. Great job doll. I hope everything is ok. =]

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I like this. It's simple, but very good. Great word usuage in such a short write.

WOW this is really amazing! It's so powerful! The best Cinquain I have ever seen...

Keep it up

Lysette x x x

Another great work by my favorite poet,
you have the best talent with words and your poems are full of true feelings, 5/5

All I can say is there was alot said in very few words and you definintly got your point across! Nicely written!5/5

This is very interesting, I like it a lot. Most people don't have the guts to venture out into different poetic styles, which kind of sucks because I enjoy reading poems like that. It also doesn't rhyme, which is good because a lot of people have the urge to rhyme all the time! Keep up the good work!

Great job. For some reason I can't seem to do short poems like these. I always have too much stuff I want to put in...lol

Wow when i tried to make a poem like this one and other so many styles I only made a disaster lols
but you can write so many styles and thats great

like this one using simple but powerfull words
nice choice and great poem

5/5

Geneross

This short poem burst a whole world of thoughts that tortures my poor mind.
Excellent job natalie.
This is an Ace for sure.
5/5

God Bless!

Well if thats th best you can do for now i cant wait to read what you have later, such a short poem but so much energy and emotions released, great work, i could almost feel that one, 5/5 again from me

xoxo Lucy

Another great poem. This was very sad also. You have taken a few simple lines and told a full story with them. I loved it . You are truly a wonderful poet hun. Keep up the excellent work!
5/5

Hugs
Letty

In such a short poem, you chose the right words to tell your story. You did an excellent job, once again. I think how you ended it with again, made the ending seem alot stronger. Well done. =]

All you could do for now?! Jeeze, it's better than I'd ever be able to do with a short poem. I thought there was emotion, and that's all there is needed in a poem. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha