This poem was Great!
It was well written and it had a good flow!
5/5

(Check out mine if u like i wanna know what people think)

That, was brilliant. I loved the emotion and heart you put toward this piece. Nice work, truly.

This is excellent. It got in my head heaps because i can relate 100% and i know how all those emotions feel. I could never put it into words though. Not as good as yours anyway. You did an amazing job. Great emotions, flow and words. Overall.. just so well done. Keep it up. =] 5/5

I like the flow in this and the ryming! I like the meaing and the way you have displayed your poem!

This is a beautiful poem and dont worry my dear it will happen for u to things take time love.