Comments : Me and My Life

  • 18 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Well express emotions with beautiful sad penned you potray here, you know; "live can to be change, but very difficult to expecting fate"

    an awesome penned, well done!

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    5/5 excellent poem. Please don't change it. It is great the way it is.

  • 17 years ago

    by Marjan

    Was this poem true? I hope not.
    do not look for a way to leave this world cuz it's not needed. you'll be going there someday anyway.
    I hope you're doing well :)
    Marjan