by katie!
Beautiful, a wonderful tribute, full of sorrow and sadness, but also hope. |
by Simon Hayes
What a beautiful tribute to a wonderful sounding, loving mother!! Cancer seems to always take the wonderful people. A very touching poem, that hit home for me!! |
by donna
Aww what a beautifully, written poem.. This was very emotional, and heartfelt. I'm sorry for Your loss.. An excellent tribute for Your friend though.. well done 5/5 xx |
by Eibutsina
Oh crap Luanne, its 8am and I gots mascara pouring all down my face girl, I look like a panda bear after reading this heartfelt write. Its so sad how many people Cancer affects and how hard it is for the loved ones of the person affected especially like in your situation when its someone so young and ordinarily vibrant. I think your poem is a very special and touching tribute to someone who obviously had a profound effect on your life...as always a great write from you I enjoyed thoroughly...Thankyou for sharing! Risa |
by Bogie
Oh!!! My, a most heart felt read indeed |
by Bill Turner
Beautifully written my friend. I am at a loss for words. She was too young and your prose captures the sentiment so well. |
by Natalie
Wow! I'm really sorry for your loss. This poem was simply amazing. So many emotions were just pouring out of each and every line. I'm sure Cathy is proud that you had the courage to write and post this. Great job! |
by Sarah Ann
Beautiful. That is the one word I must say that matches, but cannot quite explain your words. It is so much deeper than beauty or peace. One of the greatest writes I have read in a long while. I am so sorry for your loss. I wish the best of luck to you and her family in the future. Take care and keep writing! |
by Chelsey
I am so sorry for the Loss Luanne...Cancer makes me so angry, it really does..I hate knowing how many lives it took...its weird I read this...the 17th I wrote a poem for my Grandpa about his death I'll have to post it soon |
by Darien
Wow, Luanne! This was a fantastic poem, very sad and very touching. I'm always upset anytime I hear someone passing away from cancer. Argh, but this was an amazing and uplifting poem. A very beautiful dedication. |
by BlueDreams
Luanne, |
by Kim
Oh Luanne this was so sad, it brought tears to my eyes.It was so beautiful and well done a greater tribute could not be made. Amazing and touching on so many scales, everyone has someone who's lost to cancer and this poem was so hearttouching. Beautifully done! |
I really wish my feelings could come out as beautifully as this, tears were bought to my eyes especially in the last few lines and about the smile and mask the pain |
by Gem
I don't know what to say.. |
by Laura
Luanne...this was such a beautiful dedictaion altho it was a sad write. I had to stop reading to compose my self just to finish the read. This write really touched my heart. |
by Connie
Beautiful. No other words to say, but beautiful! |
A sad poem but a great tribute to your friend. |
by Reborn Rival
The heavens cry for words of rememberance and truth. You a true friend indeed |
by BubblyJolie
That poem was so beatufully written |
Oh Luanne such an amazing poem. I love the tenderness you brought throught to me. Such a heartbreak.. |