by Ashleigh Skye Sep 20, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I feel like I could run forever, |
by MissMeg
That was a beautiful poem! i really enjoyed reading it! great job. ~5~ |
A beautiful love poem with so much emotion. It flowed really well and the rhyming was great. |
Wow.. this poem is very unique and clever.. truely a beautiful poem.. all the examples you gave of the two souls becoming one were wonderful.. each stanza rhymes and flowed perfectly and it was clear a lot of thought was put into this poem |
Beautifully written Poem. I liked it, the flow as well as the strucutre was good, Keep up the great work. |
by Mommy And Me
It ran smoothly... i liked it :D ... lol :P |