Beautiful write!!!

Awe, I loved it. It's so cute.

"Dancing forever into the night,
neither of us missing a beat,
just two souls becoming one,
flying with wings on our feet"

That stanza was amazing, it completely blew me away. You have quite the imagination. 5/5 =]

-Jenna.

"just two souls becoming one,
flying with wings on our feet."

^Those lines gave me a funny picture in my head, but at the same time I loved it. very original. This poem also flowed very well nad had great descriptions.

God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

It ran smoothly... i liked it :D ... lol :P

Beautifully written Poem. I liked it, the flow as well as the strucutre was good, Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

Wow.. this poem is very unique and clever.. truely a beautiful poem.. all the examples you gave of the two souls becoming one were wonderful.. each stanza rhymes and flowed perfectly and it was clear a lot of thought was put into this poem

A beautiful love poem with so much emotion. It flowed really well and the rhyming was great.
5/5

That was a beautiful poem! i really enjoyed reading it! great job. ~5~