by Bethan
Beautiful poem, heartfelt, emotional and most of all it was from the heart and showed honesty of emotion, A beautiful piece, I hope you find that missing piece because I know what it's like when someone means the world to you and nothing will make you happy but that one person- it sucks!! |
by danielle
This is awsome i can really relate to this i enjoyed readin ur poems talent mwa |
Pretty unique way of expressing your feelings, loved it |
by Rona
I like how you expressed your emotion in this poem. A few things I'd like to point out: |