Virus Of Life

by X2892   Sep 20, 2006


You dont know nothing...
You will never know nothing...
You just know nothing...
Just shut up!

How can you know what they feel?
They been infected with the virus of life.
This virus has already affected millions,and more will be.

Those with the infection cant escape its deadly pain until the virus takes over the whole body and kills them.

HIV is the virus that we cant cure and cant stop. So your only fear is to get it, so you just think your perfect and it makes them hate you more.

Si Dois de verdad existir
por que no los ayuda
con este virus,que
tenemos?

All we can do is just wait
for the virus to take over
and kill us. All cause we made
one foolish mistake and now were paying for it...........
with our dam lives!

Copyright © Paul Salazar

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  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    This is another strong emotional poem I like it!!

    Thanks for your c/r
    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxDarkDreamerxXx

    Dude im impressed with the topic. And it held a strong emotion and argument in your poem very good. Keep it up!
    ^_^

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    Wow... a strong poem, on a real strong subject... well done!!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This poem fell behinf in the quality you used in your other poems. I didnt really catch the flow and i noticed a few spelling errors:
    "with our dam lifes"
    i think you mean "with our damn lives"
    i think it sounded a bit too like a paper informing us about HIV rather than a poem, but it could all be fixed..i hope you dont take this personally, cause ur other poems were way better:):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Marcus

    That was nice I can sense the emotion put into it...but its just like some random stuff you would shout while your angry...no offense

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