The Chains of Death

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Sep 20, 2006


Gripping so tightly to steal your only breath,
Holding on densely are the Chains of Death.
Wanting to save the princess the knight cries out,
Begging to be released, he shrieks and shouts.

The princess' yells are heard from above,
Screaming for her one and only true love.
The bloodied chains pull tighter against the knight,
Never letting go, enjoying the fight.

The knight struggles one last time against the chains,
He's losing faith and hope, but gaining shame.
The knight takes his final struggling breath,
For closing in tightly are the Chains of Death.

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  • 18 years ago

    by lydia

    That is a really cool poem well all your poems are!! But this one is like from the midevil times....kool!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    P.s. In case i did not make it clear, I really like these poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    My comp is wierd and wont let me comment on poems in love or friendship catorgaries so i am using this poem (which is amazing) to let you know what i think of your other poems, The window, is beautifully written it is quite amazing, like a onlook into some-one who is deeply in love's mind! My confession is different but i still liked it, it was such a wonderful read i was startled at the diffence in contrast between poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Esther

    That is really an amzing poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by christine

    Beautiful flow. the tragedy lies with the tormented hero. we all meet this dilema sooner or later.

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