Lovely, just lovely...

Very lovely and nicely rhymed too, great job!!!

I do like this poem, but reading so much of your poetry, I noticed you compare love to the stars and moon in nearly every poem, and just as a suggestion, mabye you could try broadening out to try comparing it to new things. Don't get me wrong, you do it beautifully, but as a poet, and such a good one you are, I think you should try a new take on it!
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