Comments : If I Died In Your Arms

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiff

    I recently broke up with my boyfriend..
    and i can tell u that I LITTERALY CRYED READING THAT POEM...i truely did..it really dug deep into my heart..
    thank u..now u have made me realize that i need to get ova him...THANK YOU SO MUCH

  • 18 years ago

    by Ney ney

    Wow... awesome... really liked it... pls comment on some of mine... XXX

  • 18 years ago

    by Cameron

    You can write 9/22

  • 18 years ago

    by Dylan

    Awesome stuff,,, i just wish it could be longer is all

  • 18 years ago

    by Christie

    My gosh, this is a really well written poem. 5/5 and two thumbs up. so much emotion, really touching.
    keep writing, u have talent,
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This is a really nice poem... but it is sad.. i got lost in the words as to i can relate to it so much!!

    (sorry for the late comment)

  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    This is a really nice poem... but it is sad.. i got lost in the words as to i can relate to it so much!!

    (sorry for the late comment)

  • 18 years ago

    by matt

    Hey i liked ur peom u should do more like it my g/f just brok up with me 3 weeks ago over something so stupid and i ahve bine abousing drugs and alky to forget about her and ur peom really talks to me thanx

  • 18 years ago

    by Colby

    Hey BeachBabe its me colby, lol we talked for a lil while on the little chat room. Anyway I LOVE the peom, keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    This was a good poem, but it could have held much more emotion in it. I will say 5/5 cause i hate giving 4/5, but it was really 4/5. use bigger more emotional words for sad poems...
    good topic, though.
    nice write.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ray the emo i am

    Amazing, i know the pain of this, a great poem and good use of words amazing.

  • 17 years ago

    by callmecrazy

    Wow... this poem is amazing.
    i loved it.. keep writng .. ur really good