Comments : Art of Love

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Hanged upon the walls
    ((I swear this should be 'hung'. I know everyone says it should be 'hanged', but does it not sound wrong to you as well?))

    But, I really liked this. Not my favorite, I'll be honest. I'll also be honest in saying I did not like the new format. However, as always, it is an amazing write filled with much description, which I love. Thus, great job. Keep it up. =]

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I like this line

    If only love could connect
    One soul to another's heart
    Bind them in, deep and tight
    A place they both have sought

    great for me keep it up
    god bless!4/9

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Beautiful poem! I loved the new style, trying something new is always good. Perfect portrayal, and good imagery. Your words spoke to me so well, especially by these two couplets. I was stunned:

    Petals fall down to greet me
    [Melodies play to find me]

    Mellow scents lingering
    [Twas love who weaved the spell]

    Once again, unbelievably amazing.