by LadyPearl Sep 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
*Father's view* True Story |
Wow, I think the last lines really spoked to people great but sad poem with a good message. |
This poem is so, so, how do u say, meaningful, and its got a lot of pain. i really liked it, and im gunna read some more of your poems, hit me back. |
by Rae
Very well written. I am truly sorry for you loss. Fear of that happening between my father and I is what made me start talking to him again years ago. I decided I wanted to love him before it was too late. |
by Darien
Noni.. that poem had me in half tears. I almost cried, my eyes were about to as my heart sunk with every word. That was an unbelieveable write. It's tough for the parents to go through something tragic like that. That one really did get to me, and you wrote it so well. Awesome job! |
by BlueDreams
Beautiful sad poem...flowed with beautiful emotions penned... |