He gives a me glare and a tired sigh
(( He gives me a glare..))

Very nicely written, just as everything of yours is. It didn't, I fear, make me cry, but it takes a lot for me to cry. It was very touching though, don't get me wrong. Very nice description. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Such eloquence in words that brewed a powerful poem.

God Bless!

That's a sad poem, but I really like it. Great work, keep it up!

You were so rught, you brought tears to my eyes....I have o words to expain to you how I am feeling right now. This poem was so sad and so beautiful, just perfectly written. I loved it.

Love Sabrina

Awww, that was so heartbreaking. Wonderful poem, extremely sad. You gave us truth so bluntly, that tears filled my eyes not because of the story, but because of true stories like this that happen everyday. Keep up your great work!

Beautiful sad poem...flowed with beautiful emotions penned...

Noni.. that poem had me in half tears. I almost cried, my eyes were about to as my heart sunk with every word. That was an unbelieveable write. It's tough for the parents to go through something tragic like that. That one really did get to me, and you wrote it so well. Awesome job!

Very well written. I am truly sorry for you loss. Fear of that happening between my father and I is what made me start talking to him again years ago. I decided I wanted to love him before it was too late.

This poem is so, so, how do u say, meaningful, and its got a lot of pain. i really liked it, and im gunna read some more of your poems, hit me back.

Wow, I think the last lines really spoked to people great but sad poem with a good message.