Very strong words, inspirational to me.
Ah The mysteries of life..
Wonderful write!

God Bless!

You are a very strong person as i can read you from your words.
your each poem inspire me alot,,,, you have a greatest talent with words and that is what made this poem so great
5/5 from me.

Maybe you should suck it up and be glad your alive.
((I love this because it is so true... Though with my poems I have no reason to talk... But yeah.))
How do you know when to be happy?
Possibly when you finally have a day that isn't crappy
((Poor rhyming, in my opinion...))

I really liked this poem. It held much truth to it. I enjoyed the alternating questions and answers..Very clever. I didn't, however, enjoy the ending as much. But it was still very nicely written. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I really like this poem a lot...
but it could be a whole lot better
I think you have a lot of emotion put into it
and I think the concept is good
I just think you could have organized your ideas into this poem a little better
still good job5/5

Nelle, that was a great poem. All the questions you answered well, and it's good to know you are on the right track in life. Don't ever give up, because there are people who will never give up on you. Right now some of those answers may seem wrong, but really, there is no right answer. Keep writing!..

I completely agree. I wrote similar poems like this one saying that more than half the world is dying without the basic and needs and here we are complaining about our hearts being broken or no understands. At least have necessities. Great job.

Nelle, That was an amazing poem. You are really a good writter. I have read some of your work, and it is very good. You know how to put your feelings into words well. I love to read what you write. Very good job on this one! i loved it.

Kathy

Great poem but i think every one done said that but its the truth so ill say it again keep writing

Thanks for the comment... your poems are also very wonderful ! :-)

I love it!!! I can really relate. It is poems like this that really keep me thinking. 5/5 Keep it up.

That poem was so true. There are many people out there with a worse life. Who actually have a reason to be sad and cry. We shuld just all suck it up and be happy with what we have. Your words were very inspirational. I love you're poetry.

Keep writing!
Cayce