Full of imagery, hiding your true intent and meaning from me. Well written and you know it so why say it? It's good to see you writing again, and good to see you posted.

The flow seemed off in the middle but then again im interputed by my spider hunt.

Pouring my life into this; with whatever wings I have left
The light again falls through the sky, sacrificing its warmth for hope
This mistake caves in and comes to an end, and final wishes continue on
Hopeless good-byes and weak words
Laughing, without meaning at the soul's love scene

I like, but I'm afraid of what it could possibly mean. Ily.

Talk soon *crosses my fingers*
*hugs and kisses*
Jenn

Some really beautiful imagery here, I like it. Well done.
*VioletRaven*