You and I

Aww this is so sweet and cute. *smiles*

i like the way you wrote this one and set it up and everything..but there was a time when you lost your flow.
but i still loved it.

5/5

Cute poem, and I love the style of this. Except, it seemed a bit forced and the flow was a bit rocky. It's still good though.

.:CiNdY:.

I like the stars, and lines. that was creative, but it did kind of take away from your words. The words you choice were creative enought to draw the reader in on their own. they didn't need help. the poem was wonderfully written, and the emtion was heartfelt. you ddi a great job. 5/5

Aww this is sweet . I love it .
(Sorry it`s a short comment xD)
..ღ__MiNDYY

Awww this is a sweet poem, nice work with writting it...