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  • 18 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, these days you are busy with writing great poems, yesterday i read a great poem by you that i thought was the best one, but yet this one is more greater. so another 5/5 from me for writing such a great poem, your poems are the best.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I've missed you!! 5/5, great work!!
    PV

  • 18 years ago

    by Arsalan D

    Your poem is fantastic. I, for one, can absolutely relate to it and I really enjoyed reading it.

    I know your wondering at my choice
    words,but I don't feel as if I belong.
    I feel like a vehicle spinning out of
    control because someone steered
    me wrong.

    This stanza really clicked,connected, and touched me. Thank you for your great poems. Please keep posting.

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Ouch
    Letty you are very good at hitting nails on heads and expressing the feelings

    Friends can be a pain in the a*se sometimes and as you rightly say they are quite willing to use and abuse because of your friendlyness

    A terrific poem AGAIN wow

    5/5 (Should be more)

    John

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Well done, Letty. This poem was sensationally good. It was very sad, but the meaning and deepness was there in every line.
    The set-up is somewhat different but i liked it, and it flowed well, grammar wasn't too bad.
    Keep writing, my friend
    love and best wishes Tara-Kay