Still I sit waiting..

by mimzy   Sep 21, 2006


I'll never forget that look in your eyes
Distant and cold, as you passed me by
I'll never forget how I kept calling your name
How you never even turned to see me in pain
I thank you, father, for ruining it all
Still I sit by the phone, waiting for your call..

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  • 18 years ago

    by xXDurrTYSOutHXx

    It Aight But Make It Longer. Keep It UP

  • 18 years ago

    by WordsHurt

    Aww thats soo sad...i really hope its not true but i have read most of your poems and they are kind off the about your father...i really hope everything is alright
    to the poem...Short and good...well expressed feelings...flowed well (lol) nice some rhyme there and no critique!! 5/5
    Take CAre
    And
    Keep Smiling

    ~D*K~

  • 18 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    I feel your pain.it doesnt feel good when a father doesnt even recognize your presence and its as if you both are totally strangers to each other.this was nicely written:)

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