Like a candle light.....

by Allen Med   Sep 21, 2006


I am but a young adult....
so young.... and unaccomplished

i have so many things in mind.....
so many dreams to complete....
so many mistakes to correct....
so many deeds to be done....

so many....

but tonight,
i felt like a bird slowly grasping for breath...
a turtle tired with its shell....

i must have carried the whole world unknowingly....

i feel like a candle slowly dimming day by day.....

weaker and weaker.....

Allen Med 8/3/06

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Very different style. Not one I'm used to...still some catchy phrases that stick to mind. Quite thought provoking with this haunting impression it leaves. It was strong throughout the entire piece.
    ~Faith-less