Comments : With you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Poison Ivy

    Once you find that special someone that makes you feel like your alive again its so wonderful but yet so scary cuz you dont want to lose that person.this is the intrepretation u get in your poem.excellent poem!:)

  • 18 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Very good poem, it was nicely written!!
    5/5
    Great job!

    (Check mine out if you want i like knowing what people think!)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    Wow, i love your poem, not like, LOVE! it had great form and a great end. very sad though!
    5/5 ~ashley

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Beautiful poem. 5/5. beautifully written. good job. keep writing