Wow... short an powerful... and again i can relate to it, well done. love ur work!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

Eep! I loved it. ^_^ Lol.

I thought it was very good, but the flow was a little off for me. It may just be me, but still possibly try reading it over. Try not to use 'filling' words, such as 'and,' 'but,' etc. It actually makes a huge difference in the poem. =P Great write though. I could really relate. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

But then you show up,
And my heart starts beating faster.

^^I loved those lines. I recently bumped into someone I was trying to forget about, and it felt like my heart had just fallen out of my chest.

The poem was nicely written again. You had a good flow. And the ending really brought the poem together! Great job! 5/5

Natalie``

Beautiful poem 5/5....the emotion is mix sad and i very romantic and sweet great job i love it

god bless

Oh i like this. I can relate to it so much at the moment. It's a terrible feeling. The flow is good, and the emotions were expressed well. Keep up the good work. =] 5/5

Wow.. I definitely know the feeling in this. There's so many times when I have felt that exact same way. But you did an amazing job on this poem. You expressed your emotions very well, and the flow of it was perfect. I hope you are doing ok :) 5/5 Keep it up && Stay strong!