Wish i could do the same lol

I like it, but where it says "you we get kicked" i dont understand it. I figure it's a typo or something. But other then that nice job. Thank you for the comments ;)

I like the first athlete one better. i'm not sure why, because the flow was better on this one. but i dunno. this one's still pretty good.

Haha i play pro soccer so i know all about bumps and bruises and sore legs haha great poem 5/5 never quit

Great poem, loved the title... good flow and rhythm. 5 from me!!!

"This way,
And that,"
^ That sorta threw off the flow.. Maybe if you tried.. This way And That way, instead.

Other than that another great poem. I don't think it was your best, but it was decent. Keep it up, hun.

Again, another good piece,
My suggestions are that you keep writing, and every piece you write, make it stand out, too many cliche words and ideas, otherwise, pretty good.
Flowed okay and emotion was okay too
love
Tara