Comments : Rose Petals on your grave

  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Oh!!! My, I know just how you feel
    my farther has passed away also.

    I do think about all the time he spent with
    me showing and teaching me things and
    now I have taught my son Jesse the same
    skills, knowledge and hobbies we both use
    every day of our lives keeping my fathers
    talents alive by doing what he loved most,
    performing live music and building and
    flying r/c airplanes.

    You have penned a very sad yet great
    poem remembering one of the two most
    important people in are lives, are parents.
    God bless you and yours and thank you
    for sharing…Write On,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by Laura

    Ah Chells another sad write. I could really relate to this peice tho cuz my grandfather passed when I was really young as well...I hardly ever remember him...this was a fantastic write!

  • 18 years ago

    by vanessa hill

    I can relate to it all. my father passed away a little over a year ago to cancer.. i have been wrighting poems of his life for the last couple of months and then i freind told me about this site and how many of you write about these kind of things on here. it lets me know that some have to go throught what i have been thorugh with with dads cancer.. this peoms hit me just as if i could feel my dad here telling me this is going to happen to me your dad. thanks for posting this one