by Lonelyman Sep 21, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Every day i wake up to wet tears from the night before i Wait for you my true love. Why leave what did i do to make you leave I'm sorry ill change just come back i don't know if i can live without your love your arms pull me back to life with every hug help pull me back one last time. |
A good start for poetry, add more detial. so you lvie in utah too wow..where in utah??? well keep it up look forward to reading more. |
Amazing, short but so well written jjust ass commas, so its not a run on. vry nice jobb keep it up. |