Though it doesn't rhyme yet it says a lot as i could feel every word coming right from your heart

all the best & take care
5/5

Good work. the emotion is very clear and very effective. keep it up.

sophie:)

ps. wuld love ur comment on a few of my poems.:)

Aww...this is so sad...sad but a good poem...i'm soory something like abuse has happened to you...i loved your poem...you put so much emotion into it...5/5.

I hate my computer...it never lets me vote anymore...sorry. =(

Wow That Sounds Exactly How I Feel...Good Work I Really Loved It. xx