The Other Night...

by SheLovesHim PerfectlyPerfectTogether   Sep 21, 2006


The other night i dreamt i was in love with u
bcuz u talked to me like lovers do
you held me close and kissed me sweetly
looked deep into my eyes and told me u need me
but slowly the light faded to grey
i was left with no where to turn, nothing to say
I opened my eyes to the world around
all was silent, such a deadly sound
Unspoken words rolled down off my face
as i began to think about time, and distant space
all the thoughts we shared together
every long lost memory, gone forever...

*** not finished rate what i have so far (also not sure about the title)

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  • 18 years ago

    by Boogie

    I really liked it ... its a great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by **~Lips of an Angel~**

    Oo i came when it had 69 views ..lucky me haha

    wow this sounds familiar..i wonder y haha well i'll see ya tomorrow

  • 18 years ago

    by Sophie

    Great poem. good work! i loved the line "Unspoken words rolled down off my face" keep up the good work.

    sophie:)

    ps. i wuld appreciate it if u could read a few of my poems and comment. i wuld love some advice! :)

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