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by herewithme Sep 21, 2006 category : Friendship, family / broken friendship
She feels abandonned once again this time is the very last she used to put up with it but that was in the past a new person emerges from the shell of this girl let the seas start to rage and the wind start to whirl as she snaps back at the hurt and gains back her power to speak and let her opinion be heard in this one final hour. "you have betrayed my trust for the very last time so take the punishment the whipping for your crime" she screamed it to the skies as a tear glided down her cheek why does she always cry when all she wants to do is speak speak of her life and speak of her soul like they could somehow help and give her back some control the "friends" that have hurt will be the friends that are lost as she walks away from her problems no matter how great the cost she could learn to be a loner to only trust herself to speak of her feelings to no one but that could bring no help will she forgive the two that hurt her so? or let them slip away this is the dilemma she faces but will she save it for another day?
by *Charisma*
Let the seas start to rage and the wind start to whirl loved that line...your rhyme scheme was a little jumpy but overall I really enjoyed this piece! nice job! Jpoet*