by Natasha "rayne" Sep 22, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
Tears brim my eyes, they run like blood. |
by kaida clover
Nice work.. good structure and flow.. funny how the ones that are supposed to protect us can cause us the most pain.. |
by Chelsea
Hey i just wanted to say thank you on the comment of "She's your daughter" and yes it is true..i love this poem you have talent..5/5 |
by Anonymous
Are you a sad person? |
I absolutely loved it wow you are a fantastic writer hunni it was so meaningfull the rhythm was exellent well done keep it up (ill stick you with my favs :P ) xxx alex xxx |