Life

by Brittany C   Sep 22, 2006


Growing,
Changing,
For the better,
Or for the worse,
Learning,
Loving,

We never do stay the same for long,
We may not change on the out side,
But we are forever changing on the in side,
The things we do, what we go through day-to-day,
The things we see and feel,
Are what help shape us,

The things we experience today,
Change how you will be tomorrow.
Love, pain, hurt,
Happiness, sadness, lose,
Are all some things ever one will experiences,
Have different affects from person to person,

You may move on after a great loss,
While some one may not,
And let life pass them by,
Never giving life another chance,
and letting there mind and body waste away.

Life is one of the hardest things to go through,
you build it, only to watch it fall in around you,
You make a living, meeting new people,
Make new friends,
You do what you can with your life,

You try to make your life worth living,
But are you truly trying,
to live your life to the fullest,
It is your life;
Why don't you make your choice?

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  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Opppppppssssssssssssss
    you described life in a very poetic and mature way!!!!!!!!

    good work :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Liliana

    I truly truly love this poem, it is so true you did a good job 5/5

  • 13 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I would say the last stanza rocked the flow, too many "Life"
    But otherwise a very good piece.
    that was again full of determination and strength
    love
    Tara

  • 17 years ago

    by Riz

    Ignoring some mistakes in the poem, I say this poem tells all about life (obviously) and this poem also encourages people to live their life the fullest. Hmmm...reminds me of a certain some one. Anyways, nice work! 5/5

  • Interesting structure, great flow... good effort, i really liked this 1..