Good choice of words
with verygood lines on it.
Excellent!
Keep on writing on what u feel and like.

5/5

Really good

Thats great life is hard but make it through troubles and it might be good

You have an interesting style of poetry o.o its good though

This is another favourite, it really made me think.
I thought this was inspiring, and your use of wording in this really pulled me into it, I didn't want it to end.

Interesting structure, great flow... good effort, i really liked this 1..

Ignoring some mistakes in the poem, I say this poem tells all about life (obviously) and this poem also encourages people to live their life the fullest. Hmmm...reminds me of a certain some one. Anyways, nice work! 5/5

I would say the last stanza rocked the flow, too many "Life"
But otherwise a very good piece.
that was again full of determination and strength
love
Tara

I truly truly love this poem, it is so true you did a good job 5/5

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you described life in a very poetic and mature way!!!!!!!!

good work :)