by Peachez612 Sep 22, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
How could you slip away |
Aww so sad.. this was amazing. I love it such a great writer you are. |
Aww i feel like im going to cry!!! |
by Robbie M
Hey. i gotta hand it to yea kid, your good at this poetry thing. and ur on 13 yrs old?! i love the way you incorperated "slip away" into the final line. if u keep this up, u might even be better then me someday;). lol jk. |