You and your heartache

by disturbed one   Sep 22, 2006


The look on your face is so grim,
The odds of pleasing you look so slim,
Its taking its toll on me,
Its blinding I cant break free,

I cant stand this Im all over the place,
Its a feeling,a problem I cant erase,
Its bringing me down,
Im sinking Im going to drown,

Im debating whether or not I should be sad,
If I do it will make me feel bad,
Because you and your heartache,
Is making me and my heartbreak

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  • 17 years ago

    by disturbed one

    Lol...i only like the last two lines...omg u know what...i found a poem i had written in math class a few months ago...or...the starting of the poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by Jessie

    Omg 100/5! I looove this poem! =D

  • 18 years ago

    by twisted reality

    I don't exactly see what you're trying to grasp as emotion here, but the words seem well pieced together. To me, they're words of emotion. To you, they may be something else. The flow was good for the most part, and emotion (to me) was amazing. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

    Samantha

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