I don't exactly see what you're trying to grasp as emotion here, but the words seem well pieced together. To me, they're words of emotion. To you, they may be something else. The flow was good for the most part, and emotion (to me) was amazing. Great job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Omg 100/5! I looove this poem! =D

Lol...i only like the last two lines...omg u know what...i found a poem i had written in math class a few months ago...or...the starting of the poem...