Once Again

by X2892   Sep 22, 2006


Why does this happen again?
When in the end all I gain
is just more hurt in my lifeless heart.
I want to know why it all falls apart
in every relationship I have.

Thats my reason why I build these walls
all over me.
Just to keep people away
from me.
But certain people always finds a way
to get pass my walls,
but not through all of them.

Now while I lose you
I just grew
more pain then before,
and soon I will fall to the floor
with my heart aching.

You may also see that this
relationship will be nothing
anymore if this keeps going
on.

I guess I am cursed
and meant to be stuck
in my walls alone.
So before I say goodbye
to you, these are my last
words to you "I Love You".

Copyright © Paul Salazar

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  • 18 years ago

    by JAZMINE A C

    I like this one too i give u 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tammie

    You did well with this. I like the meaning behind it, that made it better overall. It was really sad, i know love can hurt alot. This showed your emotions very well. The only thing i think could be changed is the title, i thought it could be called These Walls, or My Walls; or something similar instead. Just a suggestion. Great write. Keep it up. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very emotional, very sad and very powerful. it ripped my heart out. soooo sad. love poems really get to me.

    I think the flow suited the story and feeling being conveyed really well. it made it just that little bit more special.

    xoxoxoxox

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Great poem 5/5 just keep on writing all what u feel inside in your heart god bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by Nicole

    Beautiful poem. it flows beautifully...and i uderstand it easily. 5/5 its really good even though its sad. keep it up. =).

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