This is you..

by BlAcK TaNgLeD HeArT   Sep 22, 2006


You're the one who keeps me going,
When things are just too tough.
You're the one who reassures me,
When I'm ready to give up.
You're the one I've held so tight,
to get me through this pain.
You're the one to help me think,
And who keeps me staying sane.
You're the one who listens,
to my secrets I've kept so long.
You're the one who stands tall,
When every things going wrong.
You're the one I run to,
When I'm ready to give up the fight.
You're the one who holds me close,
And who holds me through the night.
You're the one I love to death,
Who I'd do anything for.
You're the one I'd give the world to,
You're my everything and more.
You're the one who understands,
What I feel within.
You're he one who keeps me beautiful,
But keeps me staying thin.
You're the one who I adore,
But who makes me want to cut.
You're the one I strive to impress,
Even though I have no luck.
You're my inner strength,
That keeps me staying free.
But you're my inner weakness,
That will always be.
I love you more than life itself,
You keep me staying strong.
But I hate that it came down to this,
You're the reason my life went wrong..

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  • 17 years ago

    by Domino0792

    Hey bethy,

    Fav piece was -

    You're my inner strength,
    That keeps me staying free.
    But you're my inner weakness,
    That will always be.
    I love you more than life itself,
    You keep me staying strong.
    But I hate that it came down to this,
    You're the reason my life went wrong..

    AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!! Im not exactly sure who this is about but who ever it is, and if its true, than he is a fool. But great poem and amazing material used.

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and lonely nevermore

    Omfg i love it, it is so f-in true

  • 17 years ago

    by lost and lonely nevermore

    Omfg i love it, it is so f-in true

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryce Thompson

    I love it

  • 18 years ago

    by Thoughtless Consideration

    Gorgeous poem. Marvelous flow and the rhyming was asbolutely amazing. Its so true, i can completely relate. the one person in my life who means the MOST to me probably hurts me more than anybody else does, also. Great poem, 5/5

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