I miss you

by ]x[ Ashiie ]x[   Sep 22, 2006


Nothing is wrong until you're crying
My tears are flowing free
Life isn't long until you're dying
Dying on me

When you got shot I did too
I felt it through my heart
Now all I can do is love you
And pretend we're not apart

I don't want to speak
Until you're here with me
I'm broken and I'm weak
The pain is all I see

When you got shot, I did too
And now all I do is float
I'll find out who killed you
And I will slit their throat.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Silent Screams

    Wow,the feelings fly off the page when i read this...it's amazing and wonderful yet heart breaking awsome poem horribel sad story but good work i hope your doing okay it must be so hard no one can even begin to imagen the spot that your in right now..hang in there maybe somethign good will turn up soon
    auna

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah

    Very Powerful.. very reminescent of some of the stuff I wrote. Disbelief, great sadness, lonliness and bitterness. Hope you are ok.

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