by Jenni Marie
I liked this very much, it was sweet yet simple and touching. |
Very sweet, beautifully written |
by ECILA ice
It was amazing, sweet and sad poem...it's hard to be in that position coz i know ain't it easy to give way for someone's happiness even if you know deep down inside he was your happiness too...IT WAS GREAT!!!KEEP IT UP... |
by anthony
Good poem, ez flow, ur good 2 go... nice job on this 1 2 i have something like this goin on in my life but we just good friends when someone iz the world 2 u all u wana do iz give the world back eh |
by Jen
Awww this poem was really sweet and rather touching hun! |
by Chris Cullen
Wow! These poems are really quite great! Ever thought of becoming a poet ;) and publishing all these? You'd be great although that would make them lose effect... |
by Goran Rahim
Another great great poem by you, i really love the way you write your poems............5/5 |
by Andi
Thx 4 the comment! this is way good!!! i loved the allusions to shakespears Romeo and Juliet!!! u have a great rhyme scheme....keep up the good work. |
by *Charisma*
I really liked this poem. |