A Tired Soul

by Letty   Sep 22, 2006


I don't have the strength anymore
to put up a decent fight.

The war is over and I have lost.
The collateral was my life.

I played with fire without any
concern of whether I would
loose or win.

But fate cheated me badly when my
back was turned my worst enemy
was let in.

I lost a lot in this unseen war that
was just for my eyes only to see.

But as I walk the mile
to my indescribable fate.
I know its not my destiny.

But my soul is tired, so I'm
giving up. I guess I'm letting
them win.

But who would have thought that
so many ups and downs
would be the reason
that I'd give in?

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  • 4 years ago

    by Omi Suley

    Yes I do

  • 18 years ago

    by blueknight

    I notice that you have a great talent in expressing your self very nice job I like this sad poem most because I love being sad lols and I though your good at any kind of poetry great piece

    Keep writting

    Geneross

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    I really liked your line here

    The war is over and I have lost.
    The collateral was my life.

    that was really good. you and me must think a lot a like because I have poems similar to this, except they are written from the pt of view of someone whatching someone else crash and burn. Good job! I enjoyed it! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I liked this alot.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Very emotional and insightful. i loved it once again. u have great talent. quite sad. very dark. 5/5

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