by Saraphene Sep 22, 2006
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
Look out the window and what do I see? |
by Jemma
The person in 'It's not mutual' would be someone who is from my college.He is a very intriguing person but i he has more than one side to him. |
by Nyx
The mirror of the life that can be.... right hm u view life from a distance......goood job |
by Jemma
That was a strange - i wrote a poem last year and it started with the same line - that spooked me. and it was a similar theme. quite odd. Anyhow good poem. like how you change from the window, to the mirror to time. it works well. The last line seems a bit random though. there is no mention of a 'him' amywhere else perhaps a fe more lines giving a wee bit of an explaination for that. |
by Amber Parker
This is kind of weird. Is it possibly about insanity or something like that? Depression? Suicide? |