Darkness all around

by Angel of distance   Sep 22, 2006


THUD THUD.....
we hear the noise again..
it's near us its coming to get us
how do we escape this turmoil,
how do we get out of the darkness
thud thud
its behind you run run.....
quick in to the light
where is the light is there any good in all of this is there a way out
is this an everlasting maze of darkness and evil!
Thud thud
oh to late....
no more thuds or heavy steps death now has a grasp on you..... all you can hear now is the sound of a dripping, drip drip drip drip
what is it................................. it's the blood of the slaughtered escapeys

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  • 18 years ago

    by Angel of distance

    Thanks that was my whole idea fear i wanted to get the point across that there is no way out from this world and the whole grasping of death symbolised bullys getting you, fights, war etc

  • 18 years ago

    by shatteredsoul

    Thanx 4 commentin mine

    love the fear in this
    keep it up