This poem is great!I love butterflies (:

Wow. a beautiful find!

This is really creative good job!! keep it up!

It is wonderful

Using nature to describe an emotion is one of my favorite things , great imagery.very well done.

Woah very descriptive!!! I loved it...It was amazing!!! I think you are an amazing writer for just being my age!! Oh my gosh!

Omg. This poem is so beautiful... it just flows like water. It was just so... perfect. The whole metaphor, the poem, the words, the syllabication.
It was just perfect. I love the meaning behind it, i just love it all. You deserve a 5.

Wow.

5/5
~Stephen White

I like the metphor but really sad..great poem though 4/5

Nice Flow...

You are talented, i love the last stanza, sad but great way to end it...