Little Things (Ottava Rima)

by LittleBlackRose   Sep 22, 2006


Do you not know that it are the little things
Like giving a big hug or just a sweet smile
That this are the things that will give people wings
And make them feel happy, even for a while
You can make them believe that they are like kings
Just by give someone a smile ones in a while
So give that smile or that hug and don't be shy
Cause these little things can bright up someone's sky

Please comment, I don't know if it's good, because it's the first time I have written a Ottava Rima

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Ottava Rima is a poem where each the stanzas consist of eight lines. Each line has a ten -or- eleven syllable count.
The rhyming scheme for Ottava Rima:
abababcc
dededeff
ghghghii
and so further
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  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Really nice poem, I like the message!
    Thank you for the comment on "Eternal slumber" it's much appreciated ^^
    Take care and keep writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Tine

    Heey!
    fijn om eens iemand tegen te komen die ook nederlands spreekt;) bedankt voor je comment!
    I really like this poem, and I think the Ottava Rima was right. :) There's a centre of truth in your poem. It made me think. :)
    Keep up the good work!

    x

  • 18 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    Not bad for a rhyme scheme. but your grammar is off. hope that helps! Jpoet*

  • 18 years ago

    by Riley

    I like it a lot!

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