Only mistake

I like it it has great purpose and has great meaning great work

The poem is short, easy to read and very beautiful...though is is true that it would make more sense if it were "my only mistake was, i fell in love with you" or maybe "to fall in love with you"...
anyway, it's really good...

*isabel*

Hey gr8 poem simple an says soo much. i'm 2 struk wid all dat.

Ooo. Great message, it really is. I've felt the same way, and I know where you're coming from. I just didn't see why you put [like any other sky
my world is full of rain]. All skies don't rain all the time. I just thought that was a little odd. =P Keep it up. 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

The poem was really good.. but at the end it says 'I fall in love with you' .. it should be 'fell' 5/5!