I love the line like

"Your smile melts my heart away,
your laugh makes me go wild.
I never knew love could be like this Christmas to a child."

its amazing, i love the whole thing tho, can u post the lyrics to the song, i would love to read the whole thing, if its different. 5/5

Very awesome. I know how that goes.

This is a good poem i like it you really are good writer i dont see how you can say your not that good your great at it

"Your smile melts my heart away,
your laugh makes me go wild.
I never knew love could be like this,
like Christmas to a child."

i like this part it makes feel like i can actually feel what you mean exellent job!!! 5/5

Love this poem!