Peaceful Night

by Brittany C   Sep 22, 2006


The fire glows,
Spreading a magic,
gold, glow through out
the small room.
While soft, sweet music
floats through the air,
As two lovers snuggle up
close to one another.

While a soft snow falls
from the dark heavens above,
To cover all in a soft,
white blanket of fluff,
All is quite,

All the world had settled
down for the night.
To dream the night away,
There dreams full of delight.
Except the two lovers
enjoying one a another's company,
And caught in one each others
loving embrace.

All is peaceful,
This wonderful night.
And all is as it should be,
As night turns to Dawn.
And Dawn turns to morning,
And the time has finally come,
To exchange gifts of love.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~*×FaÐ3D‡‡M€mØ®Ïê§×*~

    Short but full of detail... i really liked the flow and the descriptive words.

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    While a soft snow falls from the dark heavens above,
    To cover all in a soft, white blanket of fluff,
    All is quite,
    ((I loved this stanza. Beautiful.))

    Very nicely written. I love how you wrote it as a story.. Nicely done. YEt again, I feel it was rushed because of the commas and no pauses. Keep it up.

    xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Wow
    I really liked this.
    It was very unique and different, original in concept and that's what drew me into it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa

    Love it lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Misstress

    Very Interesting write..
    Something different.
    Keep up the good Work!
    You have a nice way writing, I liked it.
    God Bless!

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