Walled Heart

by FallenAngel   Sep 23, 2006


I'm breaking the wall inside my heart
I just want to let my emotions get out
Like a torrent flowing down a stream
I will finally realise my dream.

I will smash apart these chains
I will gather up my life's remains
I feel my heart beginning to crack
Never again will you hold me back

The walls are smashed, i'm filled with jubilee
Because at long last, my heart is free.

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  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Luv it,amazing work

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I adore that ending...so beautifully written, moving and heartfelt.
    I love the emotion and depth you put into this, and the imagery you portrayed made the whole piece very powerful and intense...beautiful work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Fruitloop XxProblem ChildxX

    Great job. i love it. omg. im sending this to someone special.

  • 18 years ago

    by WakingFreedom

    Wow it is verry goot, yah it is. yous got goot style, I LOVE IT!! haha, its a 5/5 for you mister
    hehe, (i was speaking village style like when the old people try and speak english but say weird words cuz they ermm...only speak one language lol)
    yeah anyways this is a wonderful work of art. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by courtz; youliedyoubrokemyheart

    Aw this is really good
    i like your style of wrighting
    keep it up

    i like the last part my heart is free

    take care xo

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