Very Interesting write..
Something different.
Keep up the good Work!

God Bless!

I liked this one alot its really awesome..

thnx for the comment btw

LOOK AT TITTLE!!!!! HA HA HA............

Forgot the r in the tittle

Very good poem! Well done keep up the great work! 5/5

God Bless

~*Tay*~

Wow great job on this. it's short, but full of emotion. i really like it a lot. some of the words you used were really good. keep it up 5/5

~Kristina

Not too bad. I feel with all the commas and no pauses I was reading it and felt rushed. And I felt the describing could have been better. Sorry.

xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex 4.5

Nice and short poem that i could relate to. nice use of words.
5/5
~Stevie

Rather short but still intriguing.. i liked the repitition of trapped, gives it more emphisis.

This one was very sad and it my type of poetry. It was very discritpive, though I thought that it could have been longer. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

Alyson

This one was interesting and seemed more freestyle then any of the others. *5/5*

Alyson

This should be in the dark section. Man, this is a really dark poem and this is the first one that hit me so hard, my shoulders and legs are heavy. 5/5

I always say, the shorter the poem, the stronger it should be, and you nailed it! VERY GOOD! *gives you a cookie* VERY GOOD! ^_^

Another great poem, full of emotions for sure 5/5